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  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
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    Revelator wrote: »
    Before the Bondathon completely moves on from The Living Daylights, here's the ending of the Express comic adaptation of the story. It's very faithful to Fleming except for a deceptively small change. Take a look at the newspaper in the very last panel...

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    Hmm, that's pretty powerful and well done. Bond is allowed to think that the girl is fine, while the truth of her fate is concealed to him.
  • ThunderfingerThunderfinger Das Boot Hill
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    Those Lawrence/Horak comics are the best.
  • That's a great final frame, @Revelator. There's a real sense of loss for Bond in the final moments of Fleming's story—even if loss over something he never could have had anyway—and the end of that comic captures a similar idea, just in a different, but no less powerful, way.

    I actually have all those comics and just have never cracked into them. Now with all the Flemings fresh in my mind, the holidays might be the perfect time for me to start going through them.
  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
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    That newspaper title is something I could see Fleming actually putting into the story, to underscore that though Bond thought he was doing the right thing (or to him, the humane thing) he was only inadvertently paving a darker end for the woman in the end and perhaps made her last hours even worse because he made her seem a failure with his actions.

    I guess it wasn't included because the books are mostly from Bond's perspective and I think a lot of the power of the reveal would be ruined if Bond discovered the headline and connected the dots about Trigger and her fate. It's much more powerful to have only Tanner or M know and have that sad truth hidden from Bond. At most I could see Fleming finishing the story with Bond leaving Regent's Park and M and Tanner having a talk about the Russian woman and what Bond should never know about her fate, but that wasn't really Fleming's style on the whole.
  • Fleming actually does occasionally deploy an omniscient "intrusion" into the story—one that breaks from the voice or perspective of the rest of the narrative and projects us into future events of the story or takes us outside the perspective of a character we've been locked into. He does this early on in both From Russia With Love and Thunderball and we see this in the ending of Octopussy where we're finally outside the perspective of Major Dexter-Smythe.

    We're meant to believe the girl lives in the story though. Bond matter-of-factly thinks to himself: "She would be in worse trouble now than he was! She'd certainly be court-martialled for muffing this job. Probably be kicked out of the KGB. He shrugged. At least they'd stop short of killing her—as he himself had done." No wishful thinking, and Bond by now would know the way the KGB operates with its own agents. Fleming writes nothing into the story to imply her fate should turn out any differently. The KGB may have operated differently in real life, but this is, of course, the world of Fleming's fantasy.
  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
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    Fleming actually does occasionally deploy an omniscient "intrusion" into the story—one that breaks from the voice or perspective of the rest of the narrative and projects us into future events of the story or takes us outside the perspective of a character we've been locked into. He does this early on in both From Russia With Love and Thunderball and we see this in the ending of Octopussy where we're finally outside the perspective of Major Dexter-Smythe.

    There are moment where the action cuts from Bond's perspective at times (like the cut to Whisper and Big's crew in the New York parts of Live & Let Die) or the out of body experiences Bond can sometimes have as he daydreams, etc. I just think it would've been weird for him to end the story with a quick little aside between M and Tanner that would be awkwardly set at the end.
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    Fleming actually does occasionally deploy an omniscient "intrusion" into the story—one that breaks from the voice or perspective of the rest of the narrative and projects us into future events of the story or takes us outside the perspective of a character we've been locked into. He does this early on in both From Russia With Love and Thunderball and we see this in the ending of Octopussy where we're finally outside the perspective of Major Dexter-Smythe.

    There are moment where the action cuts from Bond's perspective at times (like the cut to Whisper and Big's crew in the New York parts of Live & Let Die) or the out of body experiences Bond can sometimes have as he daydreams, etc. I just think it would've been weird for him to end the story with a quick little aside between M and Tanner that would be awkwardly set at the end.

    Ah, I see. Yes, Fleming usually ends either with Bond or with a bigger, more sweeping view of things. He might close with a remark upon an exchange between M and Tanner from a bird's-eye view, but you're right, probably not "in scene" with them.
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    I actually have all those comics and just have never cracked into them. Now with all the Flemings fresh in my mind, the holidays might be the perfect time for me to start going through them.

    You'll have a great time. The strips from CR to GF are dutiful visualizations, but the real greatness starts with OHMSS and YOLT. The strip took more time with these stories, and the comic YOLT remains the only visual adaptation faithful to Fleming's novel. As for the strip versions of OP and TSWLM, they're terrific expansions of Fleming's stories that add more action/adventure without straying too far from the originals. And the comic strip TMWTGG is arguably better than Fleming's. The completely non-Fleming comics that I've read are less succesful--fun, but without the Master's touch.
    That newspaper title is something I could see Fleming actually putting into the story, to underscore that though Bond thought he was doing the right thing (or to him, the humane thing) he was only inadvertently paving a darker end for the woman in the end and perhaps made her last hours even worse because he made her seem a failure with his actions.

    Lawrence, the adapter, seems to have had an even darker view of the KGB than Fleming, and I imagine Fleming's reaction would have been "why didn't I think of that?" But if he'd tried to convey the final point of the comic using prose, it would have been more awkward and less efficient than the comic, which took perfect advantage of the visual immediacy of comics. In prose the impact would have been softened by the intervening narrator and--as you point out--Fleming's tendency to keep most of the narrative from Bond's view. Adding a non-Bondian scene would have alerted the reader that something was up.

    On an off-topic note, Happy Thanksgiving everyone!
  • Revelator wrote: »
    I actually have all those comics and just have never cracked into them. Now with all the Flemings fresh in my mind, the holidays might be the perfect time for me to start going through them.

    You'll have a great time. The strips from CR to GF are dutiful visualizations, but the real greatness starts with OHMSS and YOLT. The strip took more time with these stories, and the comic YOLT remains the only visual adaptation faithful to Fleming's novel. As for the strip versions of OP and TSWLM, they're terrific expansions of Fleming's stories that add more action/adventure without straying too far from the originals. And the comic strip TMWTGG is arguably better than Fleming's. The completely non-Fleming comics that I've read are less succesful--fun, but without the Master's touch.

    ...

    On an off-topic note, Happy Thanksgiving everyone!

    That all sounds wonderful. Can't wait to get to them.

    And a Happy Thanksgiving to everyone from me too!
  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
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    Exactly, @Some_Kind_Of_Hero. All I could see would be Fleming maybe addressing the fate of Trigger through Bond's thoughts on it like...

    "As Bond vacated Regent's Park, his mind wandered to the fate of Trigger and what her reception back in Russia would be. Was he right to assume that her encounter with him would yield no dire outcomes from her superiors, or did he simply leave the girl open to a worse fate by not taking the lethal shot? He tried to brush the thoughts clear from his mind, knowing too well what happened when he deliberated the minute decisions he'd made on a particular job. What had happened had happened, for better or for worse."

    But as you say, I don't see Fleming addressing the issue in a separate scene right at the end that doesn't have Bond in it. It was definitely important for Fleming to finish his stories from his heroes' perspective, without looking back.
  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
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    Revelator wrote: »
    Lawrence, the adapter, seems to have had an even darker view of the KGB than Fleming, and I imagine Fleming's reaction would have been "why didn't I think of that?" But if he'd tried to convey the final point of the comic using prose, it would have been more awkward and less efficient than the comic, which took perfect advantage of the visual immediacy of comics. In prose the impact would have been softened by the intervening narrator and--as you point out--Fleming's tendency to keep most of the narrative from Bond's view. Adding a non-Bondian scene would have alerted the reader that something was up.

    Didn't see you'd posted this, @Revelator, but I agree. Your point about the power of a visual image versus that same visual having to be laboriously crafted in prose is right on. There are so many moments from the films that only work visually because the camera gives the audience a hint at something occurring that heavy prose/explanation would spoil, and this is another such case in comic form. The sneaky plant of the article title, something you could either spot or miss entirely, is a nice touch and all the more powerful for its subtle suggestion. It definitely wouldn't have had the desired effect or same a-ha shock if Fleming had to explain it away via description or even scene.

    Kudos to the adapter and to Horak, who really crafted a great ending. The composition of the final panel is great, with Bond in the background and facing the truth of Trigger's fate without realizing it as the headline is turned away from him. Very nice drama. It also addresses his sorry position as a foot soldier. He does the dirty work but the suits still hide the outcomes of his work from him.
  • ThunderfingerThunderfinger Das Boot Hill
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    DREAMY PINES was a real motel by the road to Ivar Bryce s mansion.
  • Birdleson wrote: »
    This is the one instance where Fleming gives us James Bond as Batman or any of the other classic "Avenger of the Night" types. Not for Queen and Country, here he saves a young woman in peril; as any true knight would.

    Very well put. I'm actually almost done with the book—been plowing right through it—and you've very aptly described Bond's entrance.

    I also have been impressed by Fleming's inhabiting the mind and voice of his female protagonist. With the exception of one or two instances of Viv using out-of-character terms to describe something, like using "shrapnel burst" as a simile for something, he has me pretty convinced. Sure, other authors have inhabited very unlike characters far more flawlessly, but considering Fleming typically wrote in such a set voice and from such a set perspective, color me impressed.
  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
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    I've always held that Fleming was quite adept at inhabiting the female perspective. His creation of Tiffany alone is really quite phenomenal and one of the best male written female characters I've read and that's to say nothing of Honey or Tracy, etc.
  • He's certainly created some well-drawn female characters with absorbing personalities and dialogue over the span of his Bonds, but reading a first-person novel-length work from the voice of a young woman is another level of impressive.
  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
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    He's certainly created some well-drawn female characters with absorbing personalities and dialogue over the span of his Bonds, but reading a first-person novel-length work from the voice of a young woman is another level of impressive.

    Absolutely. I give Fleming a lot of credit for making women characters who don't dissolve into what they so often can in the hands of men, essentially very fickle and helpless sorts who need the hero to come calling with little personality of their own to make them stand out. Fleming certainly wrote helpless women at times, but he also made Bond helpless a lot too. It was the personality and depth he gave to the characters that really shines through.

    Fleming was able to give the vast majority of his women a lot of depth and unique personalities and dreams that made each give off a different feeling, all of which is a testament to his writing ability considering he was pumping a new book out annually. He also used these women to paint a picture of Bond and show off his varying levels of humanity through his relations and feelings for them, from his lust, compassion, sorrow and more in very intriguing ways. When Bond and the girls talk their dialogues feel real and genuine, like they're the words of real people. For someone who could easily be written off as a creator of airport thrillers, Fleming was true to his word and brought some craft to the genre that really made his books stand out and that made the characters jump off the page.
  • It feels a lot longer. Fleming really lays the horror on for Viv.
  • Those Lawrence/Horak comics are the best.

    Personally, I like the John McLusky strips best -- the art style is so very '50s. But each to their own, of course, Horak certainly does have his moments. A few of the early novel adaptations (LALD, MR, and DAF if memory serves correctly) are narrated from Bond's point of view, so there is that difference from the Fleming original. TMWTGG has a very interesting bit with Bond learning of Scaramanga having tortured one his fellow agents early on in the tale rather than having "Pistols" relate the incident himself late in the book. Something like this -- and Richard Maibaum's work on the movie script for Goldfinger -- makes it clear that there are indeed times when Fleming would have benefitted from taking on a collaborator.
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    Personally, I like the John McLusky strips best -- the art style is so very '50s.

    True! I tend to prefer Horak myself--McLusky is occasionally stodgy, and his tough guys tend to have the same faces and expressions. Horak's style is livelier, with more creative staging, and his Bond looks ideal.
    TMWTGG has a very interesting bit with Bond learning of Scaramanga having tortured one his fellow agents early on in the tale rather than having "Pistols" relate the incident himself late in the book.

    It's an excellent case of expanding a tiny off-stage incident into a sub-plot that really shows how vile Scaramanga is and gives Bond good reason to want him dead.
    Something like this -- and Richard Maibaum's work on the movie script for Goldfinger -- makes it clear that there are indeed times when Fleming would have benefitted from taking on a collaborator.

    Indeed--and I'd add Paul Dehn's work on Goldfinger too. Maibaum's own scripts were dependent on the quality of his co-writers's work. His original solo script for Thunderball sounds superior to the one co-authored with John Hopkins.
  • For those working on The Spy Who Loved Me—or planning to soon—the library edition I'm reading right now includes this map of the motel at the beginning:

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    Wish all editions included that. It's pretty cool.
  • Not the centennial Penguins.
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    There's one fact everyone should know about The Spy Who Loved Me: It was autobiographical. As Lycett writes in his biography, Fleming "recorded, in what several critics thought was rather too graphic detail, the seduction of his heroine Vivienne Michel on the floor of a box at the Royalty Kinema in Windsor's Farquhar Street. As Ian later told his friend Robert Harling, this was where and how he first made love to a woman."
    Another friend, Ernest Cuneo, intriguingly mentions that Fleming had a “terrifying experience which he remembered with horror” and claims “it was psychologically traumatic, and modified, it appears as one of the incidents in his books.”

    So, this grim scene was based on Fleming's own experience, but--in a startlingly sympathetic reversal--portrayed from his partner's point of view. The reader keenly feels Vivienne's humiliation, while Derek, a self-portrait of Fleming as a young man, is portrayed as a callow cad. Fleming not only viewed Bond "from the wrong end of the telescope," he also viewed himself though it. And almost all men--Fleming presents a devastating portrait of male hypocrisy and selfishness. The Spy Who Loved Me is the closest thing we have to a feminist James Bond novel. The only good man Vivienne meets is James Bond, an eternally unattainable fantasy figure. What does this say about men?

    Drawing on his own life, Fleming "found writing The Spy Who Loved Me the easiest thing he had ever done," according to Lycett. His letters confirm this: "I am a 23 year old French Canadian girl & writing rather breathlessly which comes, deceptively I suspect, easy." From another letter on the book: "Absolutely no idea what it's like but it wrote rather easily which is a bad sign I expect." Perhaps the personal content explains why he was so hurt by TSWLM's reception at the hands of the critics.

    Male reviewers were openly misogynistic, dismissing Vivienne as an "upper-class tramp", but as Kingsley Amis pointed out, TSWLM had a better reception from female critics. Esther Howard in The Spectator wrote that the early sex scenes “rather well done" and "only just as nasty as is needed to show how absolutely thrilling it is for… the narrator to be rescued from both death and worse...by a he-man like James Bond. Myself, I like the Daphne du Maurier touch and prefer it this way but I doubt his real fans will.” Ann S. Boyd, in her book The Devil with James Bond!, called TSWLM "a devastating parody of the misuse and manipulation of sex." Those words deserve to be on the back of every copy.

    Fleming's "literary tranvestism" remains underrated. He convincingly writes in a female voice by reveling in his feminine side (the fanciful, coy side that loves shampoos, exclamation marks and melodramatic pronouncements). But that notorious line about "semi-rape" rudely breaks the illusion and gives critics a reason to dismiss the book by ignoring thousands of convincing sentences in favor of a single bad one. Why Fleming chose to include this line is a mystery. What woman would think such a thing? What on earth is "semi-rape" anyway? The term is confusing and muddled.

    The book also has a muddled, ambivalent attitude toward its hero. In Casino Royale Fleming intended Bond to be a cold, unlikable blunt instrument, but as the series progressed he fleshed Bond out, making him more heroic, attractive and human. In TSWLM he tried to grapple with this change.
    Take a look at the letter he wrote to his publisher:
    I had become increasingly surprised to find that my thrillers, which were designed for an adult audience, were being read in the schools, and that young people were making a hero out of James Bond when to my mind, and as I have often said in interviews, I do not regard James Bond as a heroic figure but only as an efficient professional in his job. So it crossed my mind to write a cautionary tale about Bond to put the record straight in the minds particularly of younger readers.

    It was impossible to do this in my usual narrative style and I therefore invented the fiction of a heroine through whom I could examine Bond from the other end of the gun barrel so to speak. To make this heroine a credible figure and one who would be likely to come into Bond’s path, I had to explain her at considerable length and endeavour to make her worldly wise.

    This I did by telling the story in her own words of her upbringing and love life which consisted of two incidents, both of which were of a strongly cautionary nature.
    The trouble she then got into with the gangsters was of the normal American thriller variety...

    And, just to remove some further ‘heroism’ from Bond, he is depicted as making a considerable hash of his subsequent fight with the gangsters. After the love scene with the heroine which Bond breaks off in the most cursory fashion, there follows the long homily from the chief detective warning the heroine and the readers that Bond himself is in fact no better than the gangsters. And on that note the book closes.
    I haven’t bothered to explain my reasons for writing this book before and I only do so now because the experiment has obviously gone very much awry, and I am in general being criticised for doing almost the exact opposite of what I intended.

    "And on that note the book closes." Except that it doesn't! Fleming seems to have entirely forgotten that on the last page Vivienne completely dismisses the detective's homily: "I just didn't believe him. The scars of my terror had been healed, wiped away, by this stranger who slept with a gun under his pillow, this secret agent who was only known by a number." She knows that Bond is the only man who treated her with true affection and chivalrous understanding, and cannot repudiate him. Neither could Bond's creator. Writing as a woman, Ian Fleming had fallen for his own character.

    The Spy Who Loved Me rarely gets the attention it deserves, from either the press or academics, who would surely find it fascinating. But the Guardian did a publish a highly recommended article about the book in 2012.

    I'll close with a question for the forum. In a letter Fleming says in TSWLM "there is an excellent opportunity to kill off Bond, appropriately & gracefully." In what part of the story was this opportunity?
  • Agent_99Agent_99 enjoys a spirited ride as much as the next girl
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    Birdleson wrote: »
    As I said earlier, we really need the input of our female participant in order to give a more informed insight into the work's accuracy and success.

    Thanks, guys, I am now REALLY NERVOUS about this :)

    Looking forward to the re-read, though! A few quick short story thoughts to come.
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    OCTOPUSSY

    “He was something of a father to me at a time when I happened to need one."

    Very simple, very understated, but delivers a hell of a whack. I knew it was coming and it still got me. The most intimate glimpse of Bond's past we've been given so far, and a revelation that adds depth to the story.

    There's a lot going on in this one: the character study of Smythe, a ruined man mostly of his own devising; a sinister wartime adventure straight out of Alistair MacLean; and the appealingly bizarre Octopus Vs Food experiment.

    It starts with a man talking to an octopus, which is instantly intriguing and funny. We soon see, however, that we're not supposed to like Smythe - a man who anthropomorphises fish but holds human life cheap.

    Bond's role is small, but he's the catalyst that gets things moving and introduces a fatal change to Smythe's passive state.

    I find it interesting in the context of FYEO, which sees Bond and M doubtful about taking on a mission with a personal aspect. Here, Bond has specifically asked to be assigned to a case that concerns him. Sure, it's not a cold-blooded assassination, but the end result is the same and one feels Bond hoped and suspected it would be.

    The autopsy postscript explains how we know what happened to Smythe, even though there were no witnesses. I like the way we're pulled in from an omniscient narrator to a more personal focus.

    Drinkwatch: I don't have any rum, so am currently unable to report on rum and ginger. I will fix this at some point.

    Anyway, what kind of drunk is everyone? I reckon I'm a Sanguine: 'gay to the point of hysteria and idiocy'. Happy to demonstrate sometime.
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    THE PROPERTY OF A LADY

    ‘First appearance in book form of this Bond Bonus from PAN’, according to my 1968 paperback (third printing).

    I know it’s only a puff piece for Sotheby’s, but I find this one disappointing. There’s no real suspense; Bond sets out to attend the auction and spot the underbidder, and this is exactly what happens.

    I guess Fleming, the old journalist, still has the journalist’s ability to bang out words on demand for a client willing to pay. Can’t blame him.

    We do get a peek at HQ, my favourite thing, with some humour about British weather and these wretched secretaries cosseting Bond by having the temerity to install a coat hook in his office.

    Perhaps the most interesting part is when Bond (rather foolishly in my opinion) pops in to the Communications Section to check out Maria Freudenstein. She’s described as unattractive, and her propensity to turn traitor is blamed on her unattractiveness; a very handy explanation for the handy fact that beautiful women in the Bond universe tend to be on the side of good, and ugly ones on the side of evil!

    It all falls a little flat after that (though I, too, assumed there was a ‘going, going, gone’ at auctions, and was disappointed to learn this is not the case).

    The central conceit of the payoff by auction is a brilliant one, as is the completely phoney operation being run for the benefit of the KGB (and involving two presumably innocent members of staff as well as Freudenstein). I just wish more had been done with these ideas.

    Bond auction, 2001 (I didn’t attend, but blagged the catalogue by pretending to be a journalist. Fleming would be proud):

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  • ThunderfingerThunderfinger Das Boot Hill
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    As for the next book OHMSS, the name of Hilary Bray was taken from a co worker of Ian Fleming during his stock broker days.
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    Agent_99 wrote: »
    I guess Fleming, the old journalist, still has the journalist’s ability to bang out words on demand for a client willing to pay. Can’t blame him.

    Indeed, but he ended up souring on the project. Lycett's biography reports that "Property of a Lady" was "commissioned for Sotheby’s yearbook, The Ivory Hammer, by a young auctioneer, Michel Strauss, the son of Ann’s friend, Aline Berlin...Like Bond doing his office paperwork at the start of the story, Ian found the task boring. He enlisted the help of Fabergé expert Kenneth Snowman of the jeweller Wartski. But he never became fired up about the project and eventually wrote to Peter Wilson, the chairman of Sotheby’s, saying he would not accept payment for what was a lacklustre effort."

  • ThunderfingerThunderfinger Das Boot Hill
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    First Norwegian edition 1966
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  • Agent_99Agent_99 enjoys a spirited ride as much as the next girl
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    Good one! I love seeing foreign editions.
  • ThunderfingerThunderfinger Das Boot Hill
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    The title is JAMES BOND ON A SECRET MISSION.
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